While the application looks good, we'd like to request a revision of the personality section.
The reason for this is that the jump in canon point is a significant time (approx. 16 months) and Clementine has some noticeable changes as a result. We would also like to see a little more detail into her motivations.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions, thank you.
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The reason for this is that the jump in canon point is a significant time (approx. 16 months) and Clementine has some noticeable changes as a result. We would also like to see a little more detail into her motivations.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions, thank you.