While the majority of the application looks good, we'd like to ask for a revised personality section.

We feel that the app doesn't go much into depth regarding the slowly forming manipulative behavior that Sansa develops as Alayne, as she is in a new place with no one she feels she can trust. She ultimately has to deceive everyone, including even herself, to survive in this new environment and much of her mindset has carried over from King's Landing even if she is not there anymore. Sansa is certainly in a place of desperation and with limited freedoms, but there is not much attention to the way she acts in front of people which is vastly different to how she acts behind closed doors.

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