While the majority of the application looks good, we'd like to ask for a revised personality section.
The personality section as it stands reads as an extension of the history section. It doesn't go into his behavior, his fears, his desires (past being a hero), and a lot of what is in it (such as biographical info, like joining the Young Avengers and how he first stood up to his bullies) is better fitted for a history section in general.
In addition you neglected to add in the "Canon" and "Canon Point" sections into the app. Please add these into your revision. Canon Point is especially important between what Teddy goes through in Young Avengers v1 and Young Avengers v2.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions. Thank you.
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The personality section as it stands reads as an extension of the history section. It doesn't go into his behavior, his fears, his desires (past being a hero), and a lot of what is in it (such as biographical info, like joining the Young Avengers and how he first stood up to his bullies) is better fitted for a history section in general.
In addition you neglected to add in the "Canon" and "Canon Point" sections into the app. Please add these into your revision. Canon Point is especially important between what Teddy goes through in Young Avengers v1 and Young Avengers v2.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions. Thank you.