We are sorry but we are going to decline your application at this time.

The reason for that is because we feel that the issue of a large amount of grammar and syntax mistakes is still present even after the revisions have been submitted. Furthermore, Kuroko is a stoic character who already relies on introspection to be understood. A setting with strong emphasis on plot and horror that takes him out of his natural element completely would highlight that even further, lending to heavier and more serious scenarios that would require lengthier writing (as opposed to a stoic character in an easygoing setting, or an emotionally open character in a horror one). For these causes, we are unfortunately unable to accept this application, despite the fact that the personality section and samples demonstrate a good grasp on the character.

You are welcome to re-apply again in the future, and/or with a different character. We apologize for the inconvenience, thank you.