The application looks great, I'd just like to talk about Beatrice's powers a bit as they might need limiting slightly. Her ability to control the life and death of anything, or control eternity and infinity, might have to be scaled down.
I'd be happy with her being able to control/destroy inanimate objects up to the size of a car? So she could fix that vase, but not an entire building? And I would be okay with her being capable of healing people, but not bringing them back from the dead.
Do these sound fair to you? I apologize for the inconvenience.
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The application looks great, I'd just like to talk about Beatrice's powers a bit as they might need limiting slightly. Her ability to control the life and death of anything, or control eternity and infinity, might have to be scaled down.
I'd be happy with her being able to control/destroy inanimate objects up to the size of a car? So she could fix that vase, but not an entire building? And I would be okay with her being capable of healing people, but not bringing them back from the dead.
Do these sound fair to you? I apologize for the inconvenience.