Although the majority of the application looks good, we'd like to ask for a revise on the personality section.
The reason for this is that we'd like an expansion on what is already provided. The information currently provided lays out a good outline, but doesn't provide much detail into what makes Nil tick and the relationships he has with others throughout the series.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions, thank you!
-> REVISE
The reason for this is that we'd like an expansion on what is already provided. The information currently provided lays out a good outline, but doesn't provide much detail into what makes Nil tick and the relationships he has with others throughout the series.
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions, thank you!