While most of the application looks okay, we'd like to ask for a slightly expanded personality section to answer a few questions.
-> After being so clearly on God's side until he died, what brought Raziel to think to ally himself with Lucifer? -> How does this potential alliance shape him as a character? -> How does his overall goal to restore Nate to his position marry up with his status of no longer being an angel in his mind?
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-> After being so clearly on God's side until he died, what brought Raziel to think to ally himself with Lucifer?
-> How does this potential alliance shape him as a character?
-> How does his overall goal to restore Nate to his position marry up with his status of no longer being an angel in his mind?
We apologize for the inconvenience. You have one week to reply to these revisions, thank you.